Gathered in Tongues…

I come in layers
Distract my body
Of its daunting pleasures
And only one syrup
Taste resting on my tongue

It’s time for another round
sipping the flavor
of my slippery gun
what I gotta have and
what I need
all too soon –
Enormous sensation
Round and round
I have gone up and down
and now, found numb….

11 Responses to “Gathered in Tongues…”

  1. Very sweet description…and a great moment in the end to really drive home your meaning. LOL! My complements to your outstanding job!

  2. Thank you for your words! 🙂

  3. A.B. Thomas Says:

    Slickly presented! The image you created certainly made the ol’ blood boil just a touch!

  4. tense write.
    Thanks for sharing.

  5. the discretion of rich evocations.. very nice…

  6. Many sensations invoked. Great work.

  7. sensuous like the color burgundy.

  8. Means a lot to hear all of your input..THANK YOU! 🙂

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