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Gathered in Tongues…

I come in layers
Distract my body
Of its daunting pleasures
And only one syrup
Taste resting on my tongue

It’s time for another round
sipping the flavor
of my slippery gun
blasting
what I gotta have and
what I need
all too soon –
that
Enormous sensation
Round and round
I have gone up and down
and now, found numb….

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11 Responses to “Gathered in Tongues…”

  3. 2zpoint Says:
    November 3, 2010 at 1:54 PM

    Very sweet description…and a great moment in the end to really drive home your meaning. LOL! My complements to your outstanding job!

    Reply
  4. JenJuice Says:
    November 3, 2010 at 2:02 PM

    Thank you for your words! 🙂

    Reply
  5. A.B. Thomas Says:
    November 3, 2010 at 4:49 PM

    Slickly presented! The image you created certainly made the ol’ blood boil just a touch!

    Reply
  6. Jingle Says:
    November 3, 2010 at 5:50 PM

    tense write.
    Thanks for sharing.

    Reply
  7. unremarkable_m Says:
    November 4, 2010 at 8:42 AM

    the discretion of rich evocations.. very nice…

    Reply
  9. Sam373 Says:
    November 4, 2010 at 2:27 PM

    Many sensations invoked. Great work.

    Reply
  10. xseverinx Says:
    November 4, 2010 at 2:28 PM

    sensuous like the color burgundy.

    Reply
  11. JenJuice Says:
    November 4, 2010 at 2:36 PM

    Means a lot to hear all of your input..THANK YOU! 🙂

    Reply

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